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Nancy Santos's avatar

Loved this from beginning to end, hard to pick a favorite line with so many great ones.

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BJ Dawson's avatar

Thank you Nancy. Glad you liked it. :)

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Jill Eng's avatar

Great poem... great ending. You described this status so meticulously and with beautiful poetry.

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BJ Dawson's avatar

Thank you Jill. I shudder to think about how many of my good years were wasted waiting on something to happen so that I could react to it...

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